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- pre-combined milk, honey & egg whites;
- 5 (tea)spoonfuls of romance;
- 1/3 cup concentrated macabre;
- optional dash of tabasco;

Briskly stir thirty seconds to a minute and set in fridge to chill overnight.

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:iconfaerie-princess-ami:
Really lovely poem :)

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私はかわいいです
:iconcoldcontactkiss:
Thank you. :)

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"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]
:iconfaerie-princess-ami:
youre welcome :)

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私はかわいいです
:iconcrazyneko2:
i just love your style!

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Today the man of knowledge might well feel like God become Animal.

Nietzsche
:iconcoldcontactkiss:
A basketful of thank yous. :D

(Glad to hear from you again, too!)

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"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]
:iconwinky19:
I love how it turned out.
Do I detect a smidgeon of rhyme? I'm impressed, dear!

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Don't you know the joker laughs at you?
:iconcoldcontactkiss:
:glomp:

Rhyme, yes! *gasp* I know. :D lol

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"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]
:iconwinky19:
*Big cheesy grin*

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Don't you know the joker laughs at you?
:iconreborntruth:
it's almost satirical at romance (well I don't think almost, but that's safer to say) pretty much taking away from yourself to romanticize, or make romance work, is what I got out of it. it flows like warm maple syrup on frozen pancakes (ohhh, busting out poetical comments on poetry)

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...my door is always unlocked...
:iconcoldcontactkiss:
You've got me wanting pancakes now.

"Taking away from yourself," is definitely on the right track. Actually, that plays a big part into this, but not in the metaphorical way -- Surprise! It was intended as a quite literal statement and kind of highlights just how FAR some people would go to woo the object of their desire. (Plus a few other subliminal references, like February getting too much credit as our 'designated' month of love.)

You are a revolutionary, Sir. :thanks:

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"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]

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