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Paper Moth Wing by *ColdContactKiss:iconColdContactKiss:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open

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Longing.

Oct 12th [DD] edit: Much love and outstanding thanks for *sfm and ^StJoan.

Daily Deviation

Given 2008-10-12

Paper Moth Wing by *ColdContactKiss's choice of words - her imagery within rhythm and rhyme. Always hinting towards a darker side, with some sort of moral code. I love her whole gallery, but this one always sticks with me. (Suggested by *sfm and Featured by ^StJoan)

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~blackdav666 Jun 30, 2006, 4:51:27 AM
maybe touching on romantic surrealism, i was touched by

"hung herself from the doorknob"

great emotianl piece very detached i a very positive way

*takes hat off to you*

Phil :D
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~SpiffyChicky Jun 30, 2006, 6:54:20 AM
I really like this, especially the line about "She was there to stay like a ring around the drain", but it makes me wonder if you mean grime instead of rime in the first line.

--
lover, now that you've left me,
I'm glad you're unlovely.
:iconsynnestarr:
~Synnestarr Jul 1, 2006, 12:31:01 AM
22 minutes huh? what am i missing...?

--
scratch it too much, and it will either spread or bleed...
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*ColdContactKiss Jul 1, 2006, 6:38:18 AM
I thanketh thee muchly. :hug:

--
"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]
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*ColdContactKiss Jul 1, 2006, 6:40:48 AM
Well, to be honest, I needed a graceful number. Twerp's birthday (the 22nd) just passed, so I decided upon his.

--
"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]
:iconcoldcontactkiss:
*ColdContactKiss Jul 1, 2006, 6:57:57 AM
Whether it be death or relationship failure, the poem is about loss and longing. Her memory is haunting, yet peaceful. But the lack of physical presence leaves 'you' cold sometimes. Replacing "rime" would change the entire feel, I think. The ring isn't meant to be dirty, simply permanent. There's a strong sphere/circle theme, too, and that commands more focus than a tie between drains and grime. Nevertheless, I can understand where you're coming from and I really appreciate the comment.

--
"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]
:iconsynnestarr:
~Synnestarr Jul 1, 2006, 9:49:17 AM
ohhh

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scratch it too much, and it will either spread or bleed...
:iconblackdav666:
~blackdav666 Jul 2, 2006, 4:54:36 AM
a sayee no problemy

:hug:

Phil :D
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*ColdContactKiss Jul 2, 2006, 2:50:39 PM
:giggle:

--
"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."

[JDM] [JA]
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`SRSmith Jul 9, 2006, 7:49:23 AM
I liked this, and I'd thought the 22 minutes was a reference to catch twenty two, as in not one before the other, nor the other first. There is a subtle recurrance of orbital imagery here - perhaps I read to much in.

I do really like this. Nicely done!

--
365Tomorrows - A new piece of short SciFi fiction each day
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